Thursday, 11 December 2008
More bad writing coming
Okay, I know I said I wasn't happy with the slumber party story, but we've been continuing it while having sex and both really enjoy the things that the girls have been getting up to. I think I'm going to re-write it in a much longer form and develop the story much slower but (hopefully) in a much better way. I'm going to start onthe first entry tonight - it won't have any sex in it but will begin the setup for the story and allow me to change some of the characters a bit.